Wednesday 26 June 2013

Assignment 2- Report Draft

Report Draft- Not Done with the design part...











Assignment 2- Rework Draft

I have decided to rework in parts instead of doing 1 minute. 
These are the parts that i am going to change and what is recommended to change by the public viewer.
1. Visual Image and colour Changes
2. Motion be accelerated and information could be pause longer
3. Changing font to something more impactful
4. Reducing Information
5. consideration usage of colours








Sunday 26 May 2013

Exercise 6- Presentation ( The Story Of Cosmetic )


Informative – audience learns something
 Easy to read – simple typography that is legible and readable
Easy to understand – Clear and crisp explanations
Interesting – use of animated graphics to convey message  in a more interesting way although it is a little bit too bland
Uses quality data – addresses large amenities manufacturers such as P & G and scientific terms
Has a point of view – multiple points of view, from an activists’ POV and consumer POV with host’s expression of love for Pantene Pro V
Manageable amounts of info – addresses directly the point of toxics in cosmetics without procrastination
Easily distinguishable and comparable data -  Data of Men and women in America’s average daily use of cosmetics 
Good use of contrast -  black and white for clarity 
Clear labelling – use of brand labels 
Created for a reason – to create awareness on what is put into our amenities
Appropriate visual methods – illustrations of products and people and factories
Not wasting space – host placed at bottom right with illustrated animations above 
Black and white factor – used to create comfortable contrast for clarity and ease of viewing
Avoid information overload – precise and to the point without straying off topic
Data dense
Use of axis labels and scales – absent in video but replaced with animations
Vertical or horizontal organization – horizontal, like a story board
Use of color – nil; only use of black and white
Data in chunks – yes, but in easy to digest chunks
Appropriate for intended audience – fairly appropriate, aimed at the average grocery shopper
No distortion of data
Legibility – easy to read with simple typography and interesting graphic animations
Space management- adequate, not hard to read and understand
Visibility across different mediums – video format, plays on almost anything that has a screen
Simple and organised – yes, no cluttered information or animations 
No chart junk – none at all, no charts used
Visually pleasing – yes however, a little boring
Grab viewer’s attention – yes, with scientific terms and the vantage of being able to relate to what is being addressed in video
Balance between amount and size of text – adequate and neat
For a general audience – yes, for average shopper. 
Consistency of content – good flow and continuous information 
Accuracy – fairly accurate, although unsure of the scientific terminology
Encourages comparisons – yes, inter brand comparison
Clear purpose – to create awareness about what goes into our daily care products
Creative – creative with animated illustrations and appealing visuals  
Engaging – engaging from the graphics and design perspective to create awareness about products everyone uses daily
Appropriate size – easy to read and view
Meaningful story – meaningful because able to relate to what is being addressed
Functional – effectively portrays the data
Use of realism – animations of humans and of everyday products
Use of noticeable differences in size – government is portrayed to be a larger entity than the average consumer
Appropriate use of fonts – simple font, easy to understand
Display what is relevant – only focuses on cosmetics which is the main point
Use of pictures – yes, animated too!

Framework
Which relationship should you convey? 
Think about your audience and select the suitable info graphic device.
-This issue had involved a lot of process and information, we personally thinks that diagrams work the best to clearly convey the message.
Organisation Principles
Visual: They might not understand if the video is full of text and information. So she added in visual where it is the easiest way to make the viewer analyze, and utilize for learning.
Semiotics: Complex information, but she uses these types of media because it wouldn’t look boring and complicated. Easy to approach by the viewer. 
Aesthetic Principles
Grid System: They create a neat, horizontally work video. They considered the focal point of the video, where they divided into a few parts to systemize the video consistency.
Color: They use plain black and white drawing. They had make a contrast between the speaker and the background by using bright color clothing on the lady.
Type: Spacing is wisely arranged in the video. Negative spaces are filled with the objects proportionally and align with text.
Communication Method
Interactive Method- It was presented in this way because it is the fastest way to reach the audience. Besides, nowadays people prefer web-based exploration compare to the old-fashion way of doing awareness.
The medium they use was low cost, and free advertising/ sharing in the social network. In this way, video could easily view by the publicity and knowing the existence of this awareness video.